Greetings all,

I want to put my own vote in for the second alternative, as amended
by Carmon.  Additionally, I wonder if it might be appropriate to add
"development and" in front of "use" in the sentence:

"It explores the creative potential of technology, promotes critical
discourse about its use, and creates the conditions for
"collaborative studio" work."

The altered sentence would read:

"It explores the creative potential of technology, promotes critical
discourse about its development and use, and creates the conditions
for "collaborative studio" work."


Chic









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